The outcome fo some effort.
overall, you have a lot to learn about basic art, HOWEVER, the start of a plot and a thought out one too. (to some degree at least.) i didn't exactly like the Directing though. at least certain scenes. Just seems too Close up and the background seems to distract. drawing the eyes, making it harder to FULLY take in whats happening. Only time and Experience can solve that. God knows Im struggling with that shit >_<
so i have to say good job.
it seems like your trying and that is, in the end, what matters in art.