moving forward
you latest submissions seemed to be quickies and tests, so i am VERY glad to see a movie with a purpose and coherent plot/idea from you!
its short, but has a clever punch-line. your art was good. you should work on animation, however, as it seemed choppy. try adding frames in between tweens to make small changes in perspective/character facing. That will create a more 3d and fluent effect.
im bad with words recently... i hope you get what i mean.
make some more shorts like this one and you will learn quite a lot!
:)